Our Heroes
They also belong to a city world. Our heroes always protect us. They come up with great ideas. It's nice for them to do that. Their names are lots of powerful names. And some heroes have their names like Spiderman, like Batman, like Energyman. They all end with the word Man. And their names are cool. But the evil ones are really, really, really evil. Actually they're super-evil. Evil is when it's superduper bad. And they try to attack heroes. Our most powerful heroes live in city worlds. They have everything a hero needs to have by their powers. They have laser powers, two types of them! One for going through none, and one for going through anything. Except force fields. Or metal. If it does that, on metal, it just leaves a black mark. It probably may be steam. But do not touch that black spot -- your hand might be killed when that happens! Our strongest hero, our master, is Benny N--! It's team N-- that Benny N-- is in. He's always ready to defeat the evil Shawan. That's his arch-enemy. The evil Shawan is really really really evil. More evil than any other evil. He's the master of the evil.
3 Comments:
Congratulations, Benny, on your fabulous story. I'm writing a story, too, and so is Mommy. This month we all work on our stories every day and then by the end of November, we've each written a big book. Good book working, my precious little Benny N, the greatest hero of them all. Awesome.
I'm loving this story!!
I see that this is going to have features in common with Paradise Lost. So much more fun to expand upon the powers and badness of the bad guy than to talk about the goodness of the good guy.
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